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Creation

November 13, 2012
By DireDzire BRONZE, Bhubaneswar, Other
DireDzire BRONZE, Bhubaneswar, Other
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The revolution is not an apple that falls when it is ripe. You have to make it fall.


The azure blue sky at it glory,the pure clean water at its sacredness and the broad wide ground at its infinity


The author's comments:
God has combined all this three for the most beautiful combination don't destroy it

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on Apr. 10 2014 at 11:09 am
JacobTheOrdinary PLATINUM, Rancho Cucamonga, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Fiction is the lie that tells the truth."

If you are calling it a haiku, make it a haiku.

on Sep. 8 2013 at 1:01 pm
DireDzire BRONZE, Bhubaneswar, Other
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
The revolution is not an apple that falls when it is ripe. You have to make it fall.

Thanks for comments

on Sep. 3 2013 at 3:33 pm
FiddleBunny BRONZE, New Providence, New Jersey
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Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass... It's about learning to dance in the rain.

It's good except it should it should be "its" in the first line. Also, it would look better if it was just three lines not four.