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Sensing Death

January 9, 2012
By babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown


Buzzards fly sky high,
Swarming something down below,
There has been a death.



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on Jan. 10 2014 at 9:16 am
bookworm1000 SILVER, Monroe, Connecticut
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Good poem!  It's very deep and you made every word count!

on Oct. 20 2013 at 10:02 am
LunarBirth GOLD, Edinburg, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;celebrate true nonconformity&quot; - LunarBirth

I got chills!

on Mar. 29 2013 at 9:41 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I&#039;d rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I&#039;d rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye&#039;s a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example&#039;s always clear.&rdquo; -Edgar Guest

NICE!!!!!!!

Phoenix. said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 9:25 pm
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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love it great job!

on Feb. 22 2012 at 2:05 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

Thank you :)

ellisak GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2012 at 5:39 pm
ellisak GOLD, Olathe, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Wise men talk because they have something to say; fools, because they have to say something.&quot; - Plato

Very Deep. Well Written :)

on Feb. 21 2012 at 3:39 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

Thank you very much! Sorry for the late reply.

on Feb. 11 2012 at 6:41 pm
JustPaperAndPencil BRONZE, Milford, Ohio
4 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
The saddest thing in the world, is loving someone who used to love you.

This is Really good ! It's Very Deep And I Love it . Keep Writing (:

on Feb. 5 2012 at 2:06 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

is spelled like that. For some reason part of the comment cut off lol :P :-)

on Feb. 5 2012 at 2:05 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you really like it enough to show your teacher :). By the way, haiku

on Feb. 5 2012 at 1:59 pm
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
13 articles 5 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\&quot;<br /> ~Robert Frost<br /> <br /> \&quot;Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\&quot;<br /> ~Edgar Allan Poe

I love this hakui (spelling?) We just finished our poetry unit in class, and when I showed this to my teacher, she said it was amazing (all credit went to you, dont worry) Amazing job! Keep writing!

on Feb. 5 2012 at 10:52 am
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

Thank you :)

tealbird said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 9:51 am
Good work! You definitely have a knack (did I spell that right?) for poetry!

on Feb. 5 2012 at 8:42 am
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

Thank you, I will xD.

on Feb. 5 2012 at 8:35 am
fashionlover16 SILVER, New Gloucester, Maine
5 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
I honestly don&#039;t know what my favorite personal quote is. I can tell u what i like, if u want that. I really like the twilight series. whenever my mom suggests that we should go shopping, i light up. I love shopping. well thats about it, byez!!!!! &lt;3

this is really good!!!! keep writing!!!

on Feb. 4 2012 at 4:15 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

Thank you. :).

Aaka131 SILVER said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 12:16 pm
Aaka131 SILVER, Dunbar, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don&#039;t matter and those who matter don&#039;t mind.&quot; -Dr. Seuss

This is great a lot of people have trouble writing haikus but yours is very nice and well thought out. Good job!

on Feb. 3 2012 at 1:32 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

Thank you so much :). This was actually my first haiku! And don't worry I will :D.

on Feb. 2 2012 at 7:01 pm
MaryEllenCags SILVER, Fanwood, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;m not an arsonist. But I am a pyromaniac.&quot; -Kieth Richards, Life

You are so good at haiku! It's hard to be a talented haiku writer because it is such a percise and disciplined form of poetry. Post more of them! :)

on Feb. 1 2012 at 1:31 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

Thank you so much :D.