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To Remain Safe, a Child Forever

June 7, 2011
By IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Sapling shivers in
wind, dreading maturity.
Stream never gets old.

© Andrea J., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
I'm terrified of growing up.
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SMWells PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 5:46 pm
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
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Some truths best left unspoken.

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Gosh!!!! That was silly of me.

 

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 5:06 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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No, read the comment Iamtheshygirl wrote and you will see what I mean.
SMWells PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 2:52 pm
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

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um...does that mean you think this is a quote from J.K Rowling?
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 8:39 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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How perfectly grand! Please proceed to walk through these open doors while they are still ajar.
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 4:16 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Thank you, this comment has rather opened some new doors in my mind. A far seer, as always, Raven.
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 30 2011 at 5:58 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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No worries, Stargirl, one can always remain a child in his or her heart forever.
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 30 2011 at 5:58 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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As I re-read this haiku, I grow rather fond of it. Doesn't the sapling know how wonderful it will be to grow into a beautiful tree? I suppose it will find out. I give it my blessing.

As for the stream, it has little to fear.

 

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jun. 30 2011 at 10:57 am
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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:) 

I like quotes by J.K Rowling. 

 

IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 29 2011 at 11:07 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Le Hannon :) (Elvish for thank you)

My poems seem to be very esily relatable, which rather surprises me.

IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 29 2011 at 11:06 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Thank you Aderes. I see nothing wrong with feeling like a child forever, there's a quote by JK Rowling to that effect :)
Anna-Akua SILVER said...
on Jun. 29 2011 at 10:28 pm
Anna-Akua SILVER, Taunton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
But the funny thing about it is I ain&#039;t even start yet<br /> I&#039;m only using my mind I ain&#039;t even use my heart yet<br /> I just evolved I ain&#039;t speaking theoretically <br /> -Keys &quot;Dear Dummy&quot;

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i really like this, i can relate.

I'm actually eager to grow up but terrified of what's ahead.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jun. 29 2011 at 9:25 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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I like your haiku.

I am not nesscarily terrfied growing up but I don't feel grown-up. I still feel like a child.