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me and the doe

November 25, 2010
By nchic GOLD, Charlottesville, Virginia
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it had borne the burden; it had earned the honor<br /> -joan of arc<br /> <br /> life isn&#039;t about waiting for the storm to pass; it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.<br /> -anonymous

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doe eyes gaze at me
hidden in the winter white forest
I take a deep breath

eyes on the creature
I raise my gun and take aim
the animal shakes

I quiver with her
our eyes meet for a moment
I turn and head home

© Robert S., Stoughton, MA

The author's comments:
I haven't written many haikus so I'm not sure how this one ranks, so please comment!
I'm also not sure if haikus have punctuation or not, but i kind of like mine without.
I hope you like it!
:)
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camohunter19 GOLD said...
on Dec. 21 2011 at 6:08 pm
camohunter19 GOLD, Sedro-Woolley, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Girls are so queer you never know what they mean. They say No when they mean Yes, and drive a man out of his wits for the fun of it.&quot; &quot;Violence is never the answer! It is a question, and the answer is yes.&quot;

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Wow this is cool. Just cool.
nchic GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2010 at 9:11 am
nchic GOLD, Charlottesville, Virginia
14 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
it had borne the burden; it had earned the honor<br /> -joan of arc<br /> <br /> life isn&#039;t about waiting for the storm to pass; it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.<br /> -anonymous

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please comment and rate this!!!

:)