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June 4, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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I write this poem to,
Those who hide in the shadows,
And cover their eyes.

Not to brave souls who,
Choose to stand up and fight but,
To anonymous.

© Sarah M., Blairsville, PA

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Chibbie1 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 16 2011 at 1:30 pm
Chibbie1 PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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Reach for the the moon for if you fail you land amongst the stars :)

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You write with passion, honesty and directly :) I don't go with the rules of writing though I go with the emotion and let me tell you... It was AMAZING
Mariah_13 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 24 2010 at 11:48 am
Mariah_13 PLATINUM, Vienna, Virginia
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Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take your breath away.

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How about Instead of I write this poem To, which is six syllables you write

This Poem Is For,

.....

DawnMarie BRONZE said...
on Dec. 4 2010 at 6:59 pm
DawnMarie BRONZE, Milton, Florida
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a bird doesn&#039;t sing because it has an answer,<br /> it sings because it has a song. - lou holtz

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Nice...but it isn't a haiku. Check your syllables again, line one has 6 syllables! Hahaha (: 
MizzCizz BRONZE said...
on Dec. 3 2010 at 1:30 pm
MizzCizz BRONZE, Warrington, Other
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Brill! i Would love to see more. x
echome94 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 5:48 pm
echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
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When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in<br /> <br /> <br /> ~Unknown~

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This is beautiful, not everybody knows how to write a haiku. You did a great job, i tried to write one called Seaweed Dreams but im not sure mine was as clear as yours.
Kali123 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 7:41 am
Kali123 BRONZE, Cleveland, Ohio
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great Haiku. love the emotion behind it too
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 20 2010 at 10:26 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thanks!!     
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 20 2010 at 10:26 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thanks so much
CammyLashay SILVER said...
on Oct. 20 2010 at 9:30 am
CammyLashay SILVER, Java, Virginia
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Failure is not for me.

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love it truly but im an voice that speaks i dont hide but ive once been this person

 

crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 9 2010 at 10:21 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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haha omg thats so amazing!!!

Thanks:))))

choreographer218 SILVER said...
on Oct. 9 2010 at 9:32 pm
choreographer218 SILVER, Prairie Village, Kansas
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Success is simply a matter of luck. Ask any failure. <br /> -- Earl Wilson

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2 things:

1. I like how the picture you chose sets the mood for the poem. Very well written!

2. I saw your profile picture, and what is so funny is the second I saw it I was like, that is my favorite flower picture off google, and I actually drew that flower in art class last year! How much of a coincidence is that?

meganwagner21 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 6 2010 at 6:10 pm
meganwagner21 PLATINUM, Old Bridge, New Jersey
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&quot;Sometimes good things have to fall apart so better things can fall together.&quot; -Marilyn Monroe<br /> &quot;Nobody can go back and make a new beginning, but anyone can start today and make a new ending.&quot; -Maria Robinson

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amazing <3
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 2 2010 at 8:45 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Yeah but u can say poem with one sylable or two... i chose one
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 2 2010 at 8:44 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thanks!!!!!
snoopy4me PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 2 2010 at 11:04 am
snoopy4me PLATINUM, Sandy Hook, Connecticut
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strong and concise. awesome! 
HuntressEmma said...
on Sep. 29 2010 at 4:28 pm

Very good! However isn't that first line 6 syllables? Haikus go 5,7,5.

I write this poem to

1 + 1 + 1 +  2  +  1= 6

crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 25 2010 at 1:16 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thankyou!!!
hancampbell GOLD said...
on Sep. 20 2010 at 11:19 pm
hancampbell GOLD, Woodside, California
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&quot;You may say I&#039;m a dreamer, but I&#039;m not the only one. I hope someday you will join us, and the world will live as one.&quot; &lt;3<br /> <br /> &quot;Not all who wander are lost&quot;

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Oh my gosh, I love this!!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 13 2010 at 12:13 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thankyou so much!!
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD said...
on Aug. 12 2010 at 7:17 pm
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
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Worry is simply a misuse of the imagination.

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love this. :D