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April 19, 2010
By thats.about.it. BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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thats.about.it. BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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I was the kid next door's imaginary friend. -Emo Phillips

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I’m taking a breath.
I’m involuntarily taking a breath to live another day.
I’m living another day just to hate it.

© Candice B., North Port, FL

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Sketched97 PLATINUM said...
on May. 19 2010 at 3:54 pm
Sketched97 PLATINUM, Silver Spring, Maryland
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I like it. It's really simple but still gets the reader thinking. 
We-R-3 BRONZE said...
on May. 18 2010 at 6:57 pm
We-R-3 BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
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It always takes me a bit to associate meaning to Haikus but when I do the  message is deep.
.Escape.From.This.Afterlife. GOLD said...
on May. 18 2010 at 12:46 pm
.Escape.From.This.Afterlife. GOLD, Short Hills, New Jersey
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I actually quite like this piece.  The message is sad, and the length of the piece actually sort of reinforces that.  Good job!