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The Sky: Birds and Clouds

January 21, 2010
By bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Blossoms of power
Envelop the skies above,
Calmly and smoothly.

Puffs of white beauty,
Dangling there in the air,
Following the winds.

© Jacqueline T., Flowermound, TX

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Looking at the window during computer class.
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bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 12 2010 at 3:04 pm
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Thanks you!
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD said...
on Aug. 8 2010 at 6:07 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
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Wow, that was really pretty!
Artst123 SILVER said...
on Jun. 11 2010 at 6:29 pm
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Some one was day dreaming, i think. by the way, aren't the shades closed in the computer class?
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 4 2010 at 10:01 am
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Yep! Good job. =)
_Jinx_ GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 9:09 pm
_Jinx_ GOLD, Liberty, South Carolina
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First one was birds, second clouds?
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 6:28 pm
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Thanks! I appreciate your opinion. Could you figure out which haiku was about birds and which was about clouds? =)
_Jinx_ GOLD said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 3:36 pm
_Jinx_ GOLD, Liberty, South Carolina
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=]

This is a really beautiful

piece.. it has a good flow to it.

Isn't this like a haiku?

Its neat how you put two together =D