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I Promise

December 17, 2009
By bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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&quot;The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent.&quot;<br /> &quot;You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel.&quot;

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It's not what you think;
You're never alone in this
I promise;

I have learned a lot;
Know much about little things;
Promise you I'll stay

Alone, we are strong;
Together, we are complete;
We should work as one

Despite all of this
I promise I won't let go;
Our bind is too strong

Without any doubt
Two is lot better than one;
I promise you it

© Kevin G., Atlanta, GA

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StarsMoon said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 10:50 pm
StarsMoon, Lehi, Utah
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it was good :)

but sammyso3 was right about the grammar mistakes.. its ok though :) for me, the poem was still meaningful
sammyso3 SILVER said...
on Feb. 11 2010 at 4:21 pm
sammyso3 SILVER, Hastings, Nebraska
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&quot;We have to be continually jumping off cliffs and developing our wings on the way down.&quot; Kurt Vonnegut

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It's nice, but "I promise" is not 5 syllables, and "two is a lot better than one" is not 7 syllables :\ sorry.
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 17 2010 at 9:12 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
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*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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Love it! 5 starzzz
bamboom212 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 9:01 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent.&quot;<br /> &quot;You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel.&quot;

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ha thank u! XD
tennisislovee34 GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 9:15 pm
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
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&quot;Every moment of your life, you&#039;re writing. Even in your dreams, you&#039;re writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head.&quot; -Frank McCourt

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ooooh, i like this :)