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Winds of Change

October 17, 2009
By Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
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&quot;If it comes out of the lion&#039;s mouth...it will be on the test.&quot;<br /> -Mr. Bala

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Crisp red, golden brown
The leaves slowly start to fall
Autum is coming

Put on a sweatshirt!
Cold, brisk September weather
Is fast approaching

Red leaves in my hair
I flung myself in the pile
And started to laugh

Children aren't happy
School is once more in session
Teachers, back to work

Falling in the wind
The leaves crunch beneath my feet
I enjoy the sound

© Crystal P., Havre, MT

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This is my first haiku.
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This article has 6 comments.

pickle*eater said...
on Dec. 6 2010 at 11:30 am

i dissagrae i lovveddd it!!!!!!!!

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

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Joob-Stache GOLD said...
on May. 16 2010 at 4:02 pm
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
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Don&#039;t be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all&lt;3

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That reply was not supposed to be a reply.... :)
Joob-Stache GOLD said...
on May. 16 2010 at 4:02 pm
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
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I LUV YOUR POETRY!!!!!!!!
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 5:51 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
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Yeah, I agree with M.A.C. Maybe it's because most of it sounds happy and then you get to the part about school...Great imagery, though.
Phantom_Girl GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 12:44 pm
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Thank you very much! :) I love constructive critisism. :)
nature-elf PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 14 2009 at 7:20 pm
nature-elf PLATINUM, Ramsey, New Jersey
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good for your first haiku, only it doesn't match right. still, good job.