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Lune

October 30, 2021
By alexis20013 BRONZE, Apex, North Carolina
alexis20013 BRONZE, Apex, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let anyone tell you who you should be, you are what you make yourself out to be


Splinters of glass

Mechanical destruction your enevitable doom

Tires rolling nowhere


The author's comments:

My creative writing teacher said the elements of a good haiku or lune is the writer having a very specific image in their mind they want to describe. Once that is implemented, a "good" piece is one that makes you ask questions and comes back in your mind every once in awhile. This lune (3 words, 5 words, 3 words) is one where I had a car crash in my mind to describe.


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