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My Command

April 13, 2018
By A.Marcus DIAMOND, Landing, New Jersey
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A.Marcus DIAMOND, Landing, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same.&quot;<br /> -Emily Bronte<br /> <br /> &quot;A shadow is the most loyal friend.&quot;<br /> -Amanda Marcus

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My beautiful,
Brave soul—
I sometimes wonder,
If I loosened your chains
And let you go:
Would your really fly
Free
Or would you fly
Only to be captured again
By some
Cruel
Doubts or fears?
Here is my condition,
Proud
Powerful soul:
Fly free,
Not weighted down to earth where
You will never see your desires

Come to fruition.

© Eveliz V., Bayamon, Puerto Rico

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