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Let Me Go

February 9, 2016
By Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
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I have not failed, I just found 10,000 ways to not succeed.<br /> <br /> All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.

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Darling why do you love me?
And why do you love me so much?
I don't deserve anything
But you keep on giving me hope.

My darling I don't deserve you,
And I want to let you go.
But you keep coming, keep coming,
Knocking on the door of my heart.

Darling please let me go.
I want to now, let me cry
Let me go breath outside
But you keep me in your loving arms.

Darling I am so sorry,
I don't want your love.
I don't want to love anyone.
I don't deserve love that strong.

© Brandon S., LaFollette, TN

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I was thinking of another melancholy song, so this came out of my mind. Enjoy.

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Saturn. BRONZE said...
on Mar. 16 2016 at 11:15 pm
Saturn. BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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&quot;The mind is better than the sword&quot;<br /> -Unknown (I&#039;m too lazy to look it up)<br /> &quot;All warfare is based on deception&quot;<br /> -Sun Tzu

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I would kill to get love like this! Thank you for giving me hope.
TheShadySideOfCandyland said...
on Mar. 12 2016 at 3:02 pm
TheShadySideOfCandyland, Chennai, Other
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This is nice :)
AWriter101 SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2016 at 2:40 pm
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This is great too, wow!!!