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February 25, 2009
By Beau Wright BRONZE, Goreville, Illinois
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Time will reveal everything I want to know now.
I wish time was just the name of a street.
I’d drive a black car up and down time.
I’d be happy.

© Raine E., New York, NY

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Mimi15 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 22 2012 at 11:50 am
Mimi15 PLATINUM, Belfast, Maine
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Check out my poem "puddle-wonderful"
vazenitran98 said...
on Mar. 31 2012 at 4:21 pm
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"I had the blues because I had no shoes until upon the street,I met a man who had no feet."

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This was a simple poem. Nonetheless,it was amazing. ;D
BeautyFromPain21 SILVER said...
on Mar. 31 2012 at 2:39 pm
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Simple is elegance. Freaking awesome!
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2012 at 10:20 pm
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this is beautiful! AWESOMEEEE!!!! 'I'd drive a black car up and down time'

SO true..

LateralusDrive said...
on Mar. 9 2012 at 6:19 pm
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I love how it's so simple but full of a feeling that almost everyone can relate to.
Kipitama said...
on Feb. 16 2012 at 8:37 am
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simple,yet really cool:) great job!
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every single person in the world can relate to this. amazing.
Andres60 BRONZE said...
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It relates to readers well and how you tied time to a street and yourself to a car was good too!
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This poem relates well to the reader---how we all feel this way!
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simplistic beauty
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Well done. Message is very pronounced and very easy to relate to!
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on Jan. 3 2012 at 3:07 pm
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This is a great metaphor. It lets us feel like we're in control of where we are on the line of time. We can go back, we can speed up, hit the brakes to enjoy a moment, go ahead to see what's coming. I absolutely love it!
Steamer GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 8:43 am
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I like this poem, very short, but you got the message across. Reminds me of Hemingway. Check out my stuff, it tends to be short also.
rolzpolz98 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 5:28 am
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my favourite movie is my life! ( i dont think that is even a quote but still i just like saying it)

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thats cooll...... ppl plz check out and comment on my work
lil.awol ELITE said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 12:24 am
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i like this, it makes me think. but i don't get why this can get published in the mag but my stuff can't. any suggestions? check out my work :)
ElleNicole BRONZE said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:40 pm
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Hey, this is cool. Check out my stuff?
ralph226andthensome said...
on Dec. 8 2011 at 3:23 pm
I wish time was a blind man over whom I could run my car. I'd run over him, back over him, then do it again--all for the sake of spite.
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Nov. 20 2011 at 8:37 pm
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plz, check out my work. nice poem
Neytiri GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2011 at 10:59 am
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Very constructive, well done.

 

mattisonteeter GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2011 at 11:25 pm
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That's great. i loved it