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May 22, 2015
By babygirl1996 SILVER, Bellevue, Ohio
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okay here it goes this  message is for you and only you becasue i wanna show you that i am really ready for an commitement, you are my light, my world, my life, my everything! this message is cause i luv you! the way you love me, hold me, kiss me , and evensay my name. you gave me a better life, and made me realize even more, i am an amazing woman, that has amazing personality. for some reason you are the thing i need, thank you, for being the one thing i actually want in my life! 

© Jenna V., Hamilton, ON, Canada

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i wrote this for my boyfriend

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