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Slipping

May 6, 2015
By SierraSpears BRONZE, Lingle, Wyoming
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SierraSpears BRONZE, Lingle, Wyoming
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"Maybe there's something you're afraid to say, or someone your afraid to love, or somewhere you're afraid to go. It's gonna hurt. It's gonna hurt because it matters." - John Green

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You slipped through my fingers

like a million little pieces of sand.

Vanishing into the mess of our past lives

and living in the unmetionable memories.

© Ashley B., Potomac, MD

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ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM said...
on May. 25 2015 at 2:46 am
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don&#039;t acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

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I like it. This ends my promised 3 pieces XD Sorry it took so long, but I had forgotten. Anyways, about the piece: It's rather short, but I, with the capacity to take up an entire microsoft page for only a small piece of a vent, am not the one to talk. I like the little "bite" I get from the words, unmentionable memories was the part I felt it. Congrats, it's a great free-verse The justice has spoken
Consalvator BRONZE said...
on May. 24 2015 at 10:59 pm
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Great imagery! And the eloquence is something to envy.
SugarLover127 SILVER said...
on May. 10 2015 at 10:18 pm
SugarLover127 SILVER, Hartville, Ohio
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Where is personal gain and perseverance without a couple failures?

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What I love about your poems is how they express pain in such a beautiful language. You take the broken glass of a heart shattered and turn it into a cathedral's masterpiece. It's incredible!