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Charcoal Moon

April 7, 2015
By capturing.sight BRONZE, Rathdrum, Idaho
capturing.sight BRONZE, Rathdrum, Idaho
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What she was finding also was how one book led to another, doors kept opening wherever she turned and the days weren't long enough for the reading she wanted to do.


Half-moons under her eyes, the color of charcoal.

They are the last reminder of her childhood,

when sleep was plentiful, 

and hope was her main food group. 

They are the reminders of

her desires of presents from a red man,

when she dreamed of living from a pink tutu and a pair of silky slippers,

and the days of skipping over a rope,

singing along with her friends

rhyme after rhyme,

even if she hadn't the tiniest clue of their true meaning.

The charcoal half-moons are the what remains of 

screaming 

"HIGHER! HIGHER!" 

to the poor laughing soul behind the swing set

as she played pretend to fly away in the levitating blue ocean above,

as she wishes she still could.

Those charcoal colored half-moons are her last reminder

of the starry masterpiece she was,

before society and life defaced her twinkling layers,

leaving her nothing but a foggy, bleak mess

of the shinning masterpiece she still is, under it all. 


The author's comments:

This poem was inspired by the loss of innocents and childhood in life. The saddest thing about it, is that it happens gradually, so you can never really realize it's happening until one day you can look back and it's not there with you. 


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on Apr. 9 2015 at 4:31 pm
capturing.sight BRONZE, Rathdrum, Idaho
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What she was finding also was how one book led to another, doors kept opening wherever she turned and the days weren't long enough for the reading she wanted to do.

@96525695 thank you so much!

on Apr. 8 2015 at 10:56 pm
96525695 BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
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"Laugh your heart out, dance in the rain, cherish the moments, ignore the pain, live laugh love, forgive and forget, because life is too short to be living with regrets"

I think this is beautiful oh my gosh!