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December 17, 2008
By AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks


And I remember she wouldn’t wake up.
Her lips were mushed together in a
Horrible shade of red
They buried my mother in a white dress
And red lips.
And she couldn’t see.
Where are your glasses, Mommy?
And still at sixteen I bring them to my face
And peer through the distorted murky lenses
To see what she saw
Maybe one day …
And I remember it hitting me
Like it does every day
When I hear them all talk and complain about their
“Horrible” mothers
What’s it like to have a mother
I’d give anything to know,
Or at least for them to know how lucky they are.
They know.
And I remember she wouldn’t sit up
And I dreamed of a stuffing machine because
Someone whispered by my ear she was
Cut in half and stuffed
And it made no sense
And still at sixteen I wonder
What happened to my mother?
And I remember her faintly
She doesn’t even smile in my dreams anymore
And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done
And I remember her singing
Though I can’t hear her voice
The only happy Christmas I hold on to
Every year
Maybe one day it’ll come back
I used to think
Maybe one day she’d come back
And still at sixteen I hope
Maybe one day she’ll come back …
And I remember she wouldn’t wake up
Not even to say good-bye.



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on Feb. 23 2011 at 9:23 pm
LoveLiv46 SILVER, Cowiche, Washington
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I agree completely:)

searbear180 said...
on Feb. 17 2011 at 9:01 pm
Wow. Ur amazing!!! this made me cry so hard. I am so sorry that this happened to you.  Keep on writing, and don't stop, watever happens. ;)

on Feb. 11 2011 at 8:21 pm
Darling,ohmy. BRONZE, Latrobe, Pennsylvania
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Ignorance is bliss.

When a poem gives you shivers and allows you to shed a tear, that means a job very well done.

AliMac BRONZE said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 10:22 pm
AliMac BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not how many breathes you take, but how many moments that take your breath away

this poem was amazing. it showed mixed emotions without losing sight of the true emotion: sadness. i liked the repeating of and througout the poem

on Feb. 9 2011 at 10:14 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

I don't know if I'm commented on this yet. But I probably have, because it deserves it. This is marvelous. 5/5

Topaz97 SILVER said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 10:07 pm
Topaz97 SILVER, South Milwaukee, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't curse the darkness-light a candle.

This is one of those pieces that is both sad and also amzing at the same time. (sniffle, sniffle)

on Feb. 9 2011 at 7:52 pm
DarknessForever13 SILVER, Gainesville, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
Quoth the Raven: &quot;Nevermore!&quot;<br /> &quot;What&#039;s right isn&#039;t always popular, but what&#039;s popular isn&#039;t always right.&quot; - Unknown

This is amazing...I can really relate, except that it was my dad I lost, I was 10, and now I am 15 going on 16 in August. This poem is everything I have felt since that year.....Everything I wish that I could scream outloud....but just....can't....I wonder, what is it like to have a father? Keep writing, you are amazing. Maybe we can email eathother, I have a feeling we'd have a lot in common.

on Feb. 9 2011 at 6:47 pm
Never_Say_Never BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
1 article 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Cash is as good as money&quot;-Yogi Berra

Wow....incredible. Made me think. Incredible imagery!

lollypops GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 6:36 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
16 articles 5 photos 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live

i am sure she is proud of you

on Feb. 9 2011 at 5:38 pm
midnitewanderer GOLD, West Des Moines, Iowa
11 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;t let what you can&#039;t do stop you from doing what you can do.<br /> John Wooden<br /> The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> Eleanor Roosevelt

Beautiful. I really liked the ending, it's perfect=]

Keep Writing=]


beautiie said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 5:25 pm
beautiie, St.louis, Missouri
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
I.TRUST.NO.ONE.BUT.ME

i really love this.. i almost cried... really i did..

on Feb. 9 2011 at 12:17 pm
skyblue95 PLATINUM, Bear, Delaware
35 articles 1 photo 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am paraphrasing, of course. &quot;My only fear is that when they are turned to loving they will find we are turned to hating.&quot; -Reverand Msimangu, Cry, The Beloved Country (a book by Alan Paton)

I loved this poem. It was truly amazing. I think you have a talent not many people have to create an image in the reader's mind of what's going on and a feeling of sadness so deep it's as if they were living it. Great job and keep up the good work! :)

[rtfmgsdg said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 9:21 am
that was really sad and beautiful

on Feb. 9 2011 at 8:26 am
ReaperValentine SILVER, Mexia, Texas
8 articles 2 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sorry I wasn&#039;t at church Sunday... I was practicing... witchcraft.

I used to think that my mama was horrible but then I realized that some people don't have their mamas anymore. I know I'm lucky to have her even when she isn't 100% proud of me. This poem just helped to drive that point home and made me look at her in a different way.

on Feb. 8 2011 at 11:59 pm
Avalon,Liv GOLD, Nelson, Other
14 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Loved you once love you still always have always will.~ Theres always a little truth behind every &quot;just kidding&quot; a little knowledge behind every &quot; i don&#039;t know&quot;~ a little emotion behind every &quot; i don&quot;t care&quot;~ And a little pain behind every &quot;I&#039;m Okay&quot;.

i realize how lucky i am, i may not have my father but  have my mama

on Feb. 8 2011 at 8:21 pm
Kenona500 BRONZE, Minot, Maine
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;That&#039;s the thing about faith. If you don&#039;t have it you can&#039;t understand it. And if you do, no explanation is necessary.&quot;-Kira Nerys, in Star Trek: Deep Space Nine.

It's a sad piece of work but that's not a bad thing. Your writing was very good. It made me appriciate my mother that much more.

on Feb. 7 2011 at 5:24 pm
ski_mayday BRONZE, Uhrichsville, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
*&quot;A true friend reaches for your hand, and touches your heart.&quot;<br /> *&quot;Forever is composed of nows.&quot; -Emily Dickinson<br /> *&quot;If music be the food of love, then play on.&quot; -William Shakespeare

This poem is very deep and sad, but beautiful. Keep writing. You have talent :).

on Feb. 5 2011 at 4:56 pm
RiverSong BRONZE, Baltimore, Maryland
3 articles 0 photos 100 comments
Beautiful.  Please keep writing.  You have real talent.

on Feb. 2 2011 at 7:53 am
abby_lynn BRONZE, Salisbury, Maryland
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
yesterday is behind you tomorrow will be a gift and today live like its your last day

that is deep and a well needed read so thank you

MaKaylaa said...
on Jan. 28 2011 at 12:11 pm
MaKaylaa, Litchfield, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you&#039;ll live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die today.

Wow!!! This is an amazing poem!!!