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Ice_ice_ice
March 13, 2015
Sweet as sugar
cold as ice
hurt me once
ill hurt you twice.
roces are red
violets are blue
your beautiful
so be you
© Jami U., West Hempstead, NY
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This article has 3 comments.
Cat_dagraca BRONZE said...
on Apr. 2 2015 at 8:19 am
Okay and thanks !
NonchalantDante GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2015 at 2:51 pm
You're*. I like this one - kind of a fun, quick, witty poem. Perhaps you could work on the meter, however. The last line, while attempting to convey finality, falls flat with the rhythm. Also, I couldn't feel resonance with the second stanza...it seemed just a bit too cliche for me to accept. Either way, keep writing! I'd love to see what else you come up with.
Cat_dagraca BRONZE said...
on Mar. 23 2015 at 1:00 pm
Wow.
Cool