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The Perfect Thing Is...

January 26, 2015
By kgoettsch GOLD, Browns Summit, North Carolina
kgoettsch GOLD, Browns Summit, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I'll love you until the last moon rises."


What’s perfect is…
the curve of your hips,
because you eat.
your squinting of your eyes,
because you laugh.
the bags under you eyes,
because you help others instead of sleep.
What’s not perfect is…
seeing your ribs,
because you try to be like her.
the scars on your thighs,
because you despise yourself.
the venom in your voice,
because you lust over something that’s not yours.
What’s perfect is you.
What’s not is the you
society forces you to be.



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kgoettsch GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2015 at 11:47 am
kgoettsch GOLD, Browns Summit, North Carolina
13 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'll love you until the last moon rises."

@houston thank you so much for this comment! i love seeing how people connect to my work

houston SILVER said...
on Jan. 27 2015 at 10:55 am
houston SILVER, Joburg, Other
6 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't know about life, there is too much to it...

truly honest! please write more! i can relate to this poem because i always wanted to be someone cool.