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I Saw You

January 9, 2015
By Anonymous

I saw you today,
Not alone like I thought you were,
Clear Crystals rolling off wispy lashes.
What makes her special, what makes her different?
Rage,
bitter,
Sadness.

Strong hands wipe away tears
Acceptance.
I am special, I am different
I saw you today,
Not alone like I thought you were.
Flat feet picking up off hard pavement,
I hope you're happy.


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on Jan. 13 2015 at 8:17 am
MarieAntoinette2014 DIAMOND, Scottsburg, Indiana
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Isn't it ironic? We ignore the ones who adore us, adore the ones who ignore us, love the ones who hurt us, and hurt the ones that love us.

Youch. That is the worst feeling ever, but I usually end up that way. My current boyfriend, I had a massive crush on him... and one day saw him talking to a girl and her following him, and nearly lost it. Luckily she had just asked for directions. Well written and simple. Very nice.

on Jan. 12 2015 at 12:25 pm
rosevomit BRONZE, Cornish, Utah
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"Marijuana is bad." -Adults

dang i feel this all the time.