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Hamburger Girl

December 22, 2014
By elliegarland BRONZE, Rye, New York
elliegarland BRONZE, Rye, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Forever is composed of nows." - Emily Dickinson


she stared
at the pinkish meat of the undercooked Hamburger
that resembled tormented brains
cut apart by fake doctors
on medical TV shows

 

the twines of her fork scraped the plaster plate
in a screech most associate with
yelps after stubbed toes
barn owls
and tea kettles

 

but brought to her gray eyes
the memories of
sirens at car crashes
alarm systems
and rape whistles

 

it wasn’t books
but beer cans and spray paint
that weighed on her shoulders
and crooked her spine

 

beneath her slumped figure
thumps a heart
neither gold nor coal
but perhaps a tarnished copper

 

because beside the sinful items
in her ripped Jansport
rest crumpled dollar bills
for the homeless man
and cat food
for the strays

 

Hamburger Girl
burnt on the outside
raw on the inside
like the sorry excuse for meat that
stared up
as she glared down

 

she swallowed
until not a single
reddish-brown speck
stuck to the plaster plate

 

she could taste the misery.



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HollyStorm said...
on Jan. 5 2015 at 9:46 pm
HollyStorm, Montgomery Village, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"There is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in"- Leonard Coren

The way you wrote this spoke to me, as if hamburger girl was real and I wanted to reach out and help her. You truly have a gift! I enjoyed your witty metaphors and connection, this poem was both entertaining and spoke so much meaning. Thank you for sharing this!

on Jan. 5 2015 at 4:55 pm
elliegarland BRONZE, Rye, New York
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Forever is composed of nows." - Emily Dickinson

Thank You! Wow, such a compliment :)

on Jan. 5 2015 at 10:38 am
Theraforever PLATINUM, Dubuque, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
And still I rise.

Wow. I like it. It's simple with meaning and open for interpretation. It's relatable and consists of a humorous yet true metaphor. Never stop writing, you have the talent that will lead you to your first book signing! :)