This poem really makes people more aware. Today, the media with shows like "America's Next Top Model", they mold the viewers perception into making them think what is beautiful. This deception came about after years and years of movies, t.v shows, etc. that tell you what beautiful is. Beauty really should be from within. I mean it has gotten to a point where so many teens don't think their beautiful or are self conscious about their looks and focus less on less on what is actually inside. You said that "Nobody saw her perfections, not even her", how could she when every time she looks at a t.v screen or a billboard, people are showing her that perfect teeth/skin/body is the only way to be beautiful. "Trying to find a reason the keep breathing", how do people let other people get to this point right before their eyes without any attempt to make them understand that physical beauty fades and it is your personalty that makes you. Beautiful poem. Beautiful writer. Amazing.

A great poem, really sad, but still just as wonderful :) great job

Sad poem but beautifully written. You've great creativity! Good job!