oh my gosh thank you

thank you so much for your opinion. i really didn't expect someone to reach an understanding on my poem like this and you actually hit it on the nose. it means a lot and i am beyond happy that it moved you . thanks again

Very well written-You can really tell it comes from the heart-and the rhythm is brilliant. Interesting use of alliteration at the beginning, "The rules and regulations My trials and tribulations My scenes and speculations" I enjoyed the metaphor of 'Barbie' being a fake-just a pretty face. And when you represented good and evil with 'angel' and 'devil', and then placed yourself in the middle as 'human'-that really captures the essence of the saying that "nothing is black or white-the world is painted with the many shades of grey in between". No human is perfect, and no human is completely flawed. It's difficult to mess up, to screw up-and the people telling us to block our flaws out instead of embracing them are part of the problem. But the most important thing to remember is not to never fall-but to always get back up.

this is really good! the almost unstoppable rhythm of this piece is brilliant.