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the feeling we call love

December 7, 2014
By rbnatalie BRONZE, San Tan Valley, Arizona
rbnatalie BRONZE, San Tan Valley, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"today is the youngest ill ever be for the rest of my life. make it count."


It doesnt happen all at once
It happens over a long period of time

the first glance
the moment you lock eyes and suddenly feel something you havent felt before
your mind scrambbles to comprehend this magical but yet confusing feeling
and your stomach starts to ache
then suddenly your heart starts to pound
it doesnt happen all at once
it happens over a long period of time

the first time you go on a date
when you both try to talk at the same time
then both want the other to speak first
when they take the words right out of your mouth
or finish your sentence when you cant find the words
when they know what you are going to say before you do
it doesnt happen all at once
it happens over a long period of time

the special day
as you stand before them it all becomes surreal
you look back and remember hearing them laugh the first time
or the moment you found out you share the same favorite tv show
the moment you knew the feeling you felt was love
and the pieces clicked all at once
it was then that you knew you wanted to spend the rest of your life with them
it doesnt happen all at once
it happens over a long period of time
 


The author's comments:

I fell in love once and this is how it felt to me. I try to have a positive outlook on love even if it is such a tragic feeling.


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fandf said...
on Dec. 19 2014 at 2:56 pm
fandf, Mes, Arizona
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This poem is amazing! I love it!

fandf said...
on Dec. 19 2014 at 2:46 pm
Amazing! It is so deep and meaningful.