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August 25, 2014
By Clary_Fray DIAMOND, Castro Valley, California
Clary_Fray DIAMOND, Castro Valley, California
50 articles 13 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of the mind<br /> -rwe


just because i broke inside,
just because i cried and cried,
just because my world is fried,
just because i’ve died and died,
just because i’ve sighed and sighed,
just because i value life,
just because my life’s a strife,
just because i had a fright,
just because i had a fight,
doesn’t mean i’m wound up tight,
just because i chose to write.


The author's comments:

Yes, it's all lowercase. How apt of you to notice. Now figure out why. And this poem does have a meaning. Figure it out. Comment it if you so desire.


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on Dec. 22 2014 at 8:39 pm
Clary_Fray DIAMOND, Castro Valley, California
50 articles 13 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of the mind<br /> -rwe

Hey readers-- if you like this, you should check out a writer whose skills are equally admirable @MissEmilyDickinson

on Nov. 15 2014 at 9:39 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Haha, no; I haven't yet been published. I'm not sure if will, but I feel like I am getting published when my friends are published. And I'm proud and happy when my friends are published. :) But also, thank you. :)

on Nov. 14 2014 at 7:27 pm
Clary_Fray DIAMOND, Castro Valley, California
50 articles 13 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of the mind<br /> -rwe

Thank you so much! Have you been published? Your poetry definitely deserves attention. It's beautiful and pure, expressing things that many have trouble expressing. :)

on Nov. 13 2014 at 10:55 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Eekk, I'm so glad. Congrats, Clary_Fary! You truly deserve this. I'm so glad you're getting published. :) I love the emotion and rawness and honesty in your poem; it's abolutely, beautiful and breath-taking to me. :) I'm so proud of you and happy for you, my friend. :) Thank you for sharing this!