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Fudge Sundae

August 13, 2014
By Clary_Fray DIAMOND, Castro Valley, California
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Clary_Fray DIAMOND, Castro Valley, California
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Chocolate hair

turned caramel by chemicals


Vanilla skin

turned fudgy by sunlight

Hazelnut eyes
placed behind spun sugar frames

Maraschino lips
turned raspberry sherbet by time

I guess you could call my guy

a fudge sundae.

© Alisha N., Waxhaw, NC

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I think if I were the reader the lack of punctuation would bother me a lot. As the writer, I intend a message to be put forth with the lack of punctuation. If you have a guess comment it. I'd love to see how readers interpret this.
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