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Sunset at the Beach

August 10, 2014
By Shadow_hunter SILVER, Nairobi, Other
Shadow_hunter SILVER, Nairobi, Other
6 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Doing things that have not been done yet, is called aspiration and fulfilling them is success"


At the beach, the sight of the sun going down
It's more beautiful than a jeweled crown
Every weekend, everyone in our little town
Comes to see the sun go down

I see some teenagers playing volleyball
And little kids running along
Families spending time together
These memories are all to be treasured

There are beautiful shells on the sandy shore
I truly wish I collected more
Everyone is having fun in the sun
No one can get in the way and ruin this perfect day

Up in the sky the seagulls soar
The ocean waves come crashing at shore
The cool sea breeze refreshes me
There's no other place I'd rather be



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on Aug. 23 2014 at 9:45 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Also, thank you for sharing this!

on Aug. 23 2014 at 9:44 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

This is perfect! I love it. It's FANTASTIC. I love that it has nature and family in it. I love sunsets. ; ) lol, my mother can tell you how much I love them. I never tire of watching them come down. Nature and music are one of the things that are important to me ; ) 

on Aug. 17 2014 at 5:19 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

This is so beautiful...I love the the detail use and the description. It's so poetic and especially TRUE. I love the sunset view. It doesn't matter how many times I see it, it just keeps amazing me every single day ^_^ I like your poem cuz it gives the perfect description of this incrediblly beautiful view of sunset. So keep it up and thanks for sharing this. Oooh I almost forgot, chocolat and music are also the most important thi,gs in my life :D I loooooovvveee Chocolat. I always say if Chocolat was a man I would marry him ;) LOL ^_^