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The Ceramic Girl

July 23, 2014
By Sara3445 GOLD, South Hadley, Massachusetts
Sara3445 GOLD, South Hadley, Massachusetts
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The tragically beautiful Monday-
The day he asked her
If he could have a date that Friday,
She grew into her glass shell.
She was euphoric,
She was ecstatic,
As if nothing could ever happen.
Life was going perfectly;
Her glossy finish shined everyday,
With a sort of radiance that you couldn't help but notice,
As if nothing could happen.
With her porcelain smile plastered on her face,
She sat and waited.
For the message she'd anticipated
That agonizing week.
It was the first day she realized-
Life isn't always happy;
It's not always blue skies and butterflies,
Sometimes it's tears and rejection.
It was the first day
A crack went up and down her priceless china spine.
She hid it well,
With beautiful shirts and a broken smile.
Nobody would have guessed,
The ceramic girl was in the midst of shattering.


The author's comments:
I hope you read this and think "what a twisted fairytale" but then you think more and realize that it's reality without sugarcoating.

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on Aug. 4 2014 at 11:55 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Also, I just wanted to say that, that life has its ups and downs, but in the end it's worth it all. Never give up.

on Aug. 4 2014 at 11:54 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

You're right. Your is reality without sugarcoating. Your poem is very descriptive and full of emotion and power. I love the idea you used in your poem, my friend. Thank you for sharing this! You're a very talented person.