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I FELL

July 23, 2014
By Angelbaby BRONZE, Norway , Michigan
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Angelbaby BRONZE, Norway , Michigan
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I fell for it all,
your lies,
your words,
I fell so deep in it all.
my heart fell for your ways,
your ways of playing games,
I kept thinking... how could I let myself fall.
I thought I had the best in the world,
you made me think,
I fell for your love,
all you gave,
I let myself believe,
you would keep me safe,
and never let me fall.
all that changed when I seen you with someone else,
you left me to fall,
and once again,
I fell for it all,
your lies,
your words,
I fell for it all.

© Asia B., Hudson, MA

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this poem is an emotional heartbreak that lead me to write this
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Angelbaby BRONZE said...
on Jan. 13 2015 at 9:01 pm
Angelbaby BRONZE, Norway , Michigan
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thank you @DarkLightning and and God has helped me back up on the right path since that happened.. I will continue to keep writing as much as i could.
SunballSunny said...
on Dec. 24 2014 at 11:05 pm
SunballSunny, Other, North Dakota
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Very good indeed. :) Keep up to the good work and remember God will help you get back up again. :)
Angelbaby BRONZE said...
on Aug. 29 2014 at 11:11 am
Angelbaby BRONZE, Norway , Michigan
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'Don't judge a book by its cover'

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why than you very much for the comment, writing keeps me sane when im sad. :)
Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Aug. 19 2014 at 6:49 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
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&quot;If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them.&quot;<br /> Henry David Thoreau<br /> <br /> &quot;I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once.&quot;<br /> John Green

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I love the repetition in this poem; it gives it a nice feeling to it, one that's catchy and likeable. It's also very relateable. Nice job and keep writing! :)