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Love is a Rollercoaster

June 30, 2014
By Hbkooy PLATINUM, Champaign, Illinois
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Meeting you our relationship builds
Up, up, higher and higher
We reach the top
We kiss
Frozen in time
But then I see her
You and her
And we fall down, down
Falling quickly, tears streaming
So fast, so sudden
The wind so cold
Pounding my face
And then it straightens
I’m numb
A flat feeling consumes me
It seems the ride is over
And then he shows up
And my spirit lifts

© Aaron S., Shelby, NC

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Yeah, I know it's cliche. Just wanted to post just in case :P
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