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The Teenage Days MAG

May 20, 2014
By true-lee GOLD, Ridgefield, Connecticut
true-lee GOLD, Ridgefield, Connecticut
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Gossamer silks rustle softly,
dancing away with the mischievous breeze
silk and velvet ribbons flutter like butterflies,
pointed shoes –
fly away to neverland, darling.
I see you when you arrive.



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on Sep. 19 2014 at 10:52 am
TheVoiceOfInk GOLD, Calgary, Other
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Anything that references Peter Pan has to be amazing! :D

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on May. 25 2014 at 12:18 pm
true-lee GOLD, Ridgefield, Connecticut
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"Texture" -- I love your use of that word. It's provokes a multitude of images form me, especially when placed next to "words". But enough ranting -- thank you for your comment!

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on May. 25 2014 at 12:17 pm
true-lee GOLD, Ridgefield, Connecticut
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Why thank you! I love the process of choosing words; it's simply beautiful.

on May. 25 2014 at 11:04 am
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

I like the texture words you used. Would you mind checking out my poems Vampire Nocturne and Whyis'Why' so hard to answer? Thx

on May. 23 2014 at 4:44 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
A miracle is just another name for hard work<br /> -Minho in &quot;To The Beautiful You&quot;

nice choice of words^^