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Last Goodbye

March 25, 2014
By alwaysreal BRONZE, Harvey, Louisiana
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alwaysreal BRONZE, Harvey, Louisiana
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Immature love says: &#039;I love you because I need you.&#039; Mature love says &#039;I need you because I love you.&#039;<br /> Erich Fromm<br /> The true sign of intelligence is not knowledge but imagination.<br /> Albert Einstein<br /> Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing.<br /> Benjamin Franklin

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Time ticks.
Memories fade.
There's nothing I wouldn't do to stay.
I just hope you know it wasn't supposed to be this way.
Sorry you had to see me that way once.
But I promise it's not going to end this way.
Not without me fighting for your heart.
Thanks to you I can see every thing through.
But not any more since you had to go and lose all hope you had of life.
I was there when you knew you had to fight.
So this is my last goodbye before you die.

© Lauren G., Pompton Plains, NJ

The author's comments:
I was listening to 'The Kill' by 30 Seconds to Mars while I was writing this. My friend I wrote this for is also suicidal so this is what I felt like when I found out.
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HudaZav SILVER said...
on Apr. 10 2014 at 9:52 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
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This really hit me hard, youre an amazing poet and I hope your friend is doing okay. I will be sure to check out more of your work