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Sleepwalking MAG

November 18, 2008
By Keegan Watters SILVER, Dallas, Texas
Keegan Watters SILVER, Dallas, Texas
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At night, I escape
in my drowsy stupor I roam the hallways.
I take long scalding showers and wake up all red and spotted;
I flick the lights on and off for hours;
I climb onto balconies and yell about nothing at all.

At night, I sleepwalk
all the stress of my day is let out in the darkness.
I scare others but petrify myself,
because that girl sleepwalking down the hall isn’t me.
She is all of my fear; my hopes; my anguish;
my loves and my annoyances;
everything that is me wrapped up into one:

But that girl sleepwalking down the hall isn’t me.



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Lix odicy said...
on Feb. 13 2014 at 9:30 am
Pretty kool

on Oct. 6 2012 at 7:19 pm
Bradical BRONZE, Morgantown, West Virginia
2 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I went to the woods because I wanted to live deliberately, I wanted to live deep and suck out all the marrow of life, To put to rout all that was not life and not when I had come to die Discover that I had not lived.” --Henry David Thoreau

The way in which you present sleepwalking is very interesting to me. You have sort of turned it from a physical issue to more of a socio-psychological one. Great poem!

mongooseman0 said...
on Aug. 1 2012 at 9:52 am
mongooseman0, Bristol, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Its always darkest before the dawn. (Florence and the Machine, Shake it Out)

That is very true, consise and shocking. I like it!

InkWriter13 said...
on Jun. 22 2012 at 7:22 pm
Cool poem. 5 stars. A testament to the truth of self-identity. A nice take on sleepwalking. Insightful and well-written. Will you please comment on my two poems titled Without the Writer and the Printer?

on Jun. 2 2011 at 6:46 pm
HallieAnnaLissette BRONZE, Adrian, Michigan
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never let the fear of the dark, keep you from seeing the moon." - Unknown

The randomness of the symptoms shows the complexity of your idea in just a few short words. I was taken from the first line.

on Mar. 27 2011 at 4:39 pm
BrielleIsTheBomb SILVER, Eugene, Oregon
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life may not be the party we hoped for, but while we're here we should dance" <3

I LOVED this. It is entirely relateable, even to people who don't sleepwalk. I can feel the emotion and I get the rawness. 5 stars. Thanks for sharing :)  

MallyJo BRONZE said...
on Mar. 9 2011 at 1:11 pm
MallyJo BRONZE, Centerville, Iowa
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never stop dreaming, for if you stop dreaming, the world loses it's beauty.""

I love this! It's amazing. :)

on Feb. 11 2011 at 11:24 pm
PerfectMGymnast DIAMOND, Parker, Colorado
57 articles 25 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't leap you'lll never know what it's like to fly"

another great poem! your word choice is really good!!

Nelson SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2011 at 2:15 pm
Nelson SILVER, Amarillo, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When you&#039;re dreaming with a broken heart, the waking up is the hardest part...&quot; -John Mayer-<br /> &quot;Never Neverland I&#039;m used to Peter Pan because nobody wants to grow old...&quot; -Lyfe Jennings-<br /> &quot;Never let the world see what you&#039;re really feeling.&quot; -Mom-

OMG!!!! I love this poem!!!! :D It is amazing! I love how I can connect to it and feel what you feel. I can tell you put some emotion and some work into this poem. Great poem. I give it 5 stars. :D

on Dec. 24 2010 at 3:09 pm
_MissLaurel_ BRONZE, Moosic, Pennsylvania
4 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Amazing work. I sleepwalk too, but somehow I think that it isn't exactly what you are getting at. This is deep, and I feel I would have to re-read it several more times and sleep on it (pun not intended) to fully grasp it. I love poem like this. :)

~Laurel


on Aug. 20 2010 at 8:29 pm
cupcake420 BRONZE, Hdj, Texas
1 article 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
THe best thing you can do for the person you love is to let them go .. and if they come back then you know i was ment to be :)

you are vey good writter and i love this work you did keep it up

on Aug. 20 2010 at 11:30 am
SuicidalDreamer.. PLATINUM, Marshall, Illinois
31 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Drop The World.....&quot; Or &quot;Everything Happens For A Reason.....&quot; Or &quot;I am jealous of every woman that has ever hugged him, Cause for that mere second. They held my entire world.&quot;

This was amazing! I am so captured by all of it! You are very talented, Keep up the good work! : DDD

on Aug. 20 2010 at 11:28 am
SuicidalDreamer.. PLATINUM, Marshall, Illinois
31 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Drop The World.....&quot; Or &quot;Everything Happens For A Reason.....&quot; Or &quot;I am jealous of every woman that has ever hugged him, Cause for that mere second. They held my entire world.&quot;

Buddy this poem was beautiful and you have to be able to relate or at least understand what this was about....But I guess you didn't get it....Try maybe reading it over a few times :D

on Jul. 29 2010 at 6:20 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;when you cry, do you waste your tears?&quot; Madonna

though you dont want to be connected to that sleeping self, it sounds as if you sleepwalk through your days.... great stuff

on Jul. 29 2010 at 6:06 pm
Kortny_Mae GOLD, Davenport, Iowa
10 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;m not short!...I&#039;m fun sized!!!!!&quot;

it was really good nd i liked it. good job!!!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 12:32 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

all i could possibly say is that was VERY BEAUTIFUL, your words capture me and my mind. Keep it up...thumbs up:)

zobug96 said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 9:55 am
this poem is ten times better than the number 1 pic of the day

gemmmmma GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2010 at 8:58 pm
gemmmmma GOLD, Leopold, Other
12 articles 5 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
make sure you live before you die.

i adore this poem. i can totally relate. brilliant work i love it, i'll check out your other stuff. i love the way you write it reminds me of my writing a bit. i love your ending line, they're always the most important to me when i write and this just sums it all up in one i love it, good job :)

xoxo


on Feb. 28 2010 at 7:10 pm
holycrackers you don't understand the meaning of this poem you need to think deeper

holycrackers said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 7:07 pm
if it isn't you who is it ( i mean for realz if it's notyou) okay it's nice but where's the soul in it. i feel nothing.