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How to name it?

March 25, 2014
By WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
30 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
The legacy you leave is the one you live


I know, I wanna write,
But not what it could be about;
Now, that I’ve started thinking,
Why not ink it out?

The words rush in like the overflowing cataract
And roar out nothing, but silent syllables!
When I try to make little sense,
It’s just like a flood in the sandy wilderness.

I’m trying to get the words together and bind,
But they fly up, up in the sky
along with the clouds,
And say, “Never mind”!

Oh, my Lingo!
Is this a trap you’re trying to hold me in?
While you are still thinking
That you’re playing ‘Hide-and-Seek’ with me,
I’ve already caught you on my page;
Why don’t you come and see?!


The author's comments:
I sat on my writing desk and was sure to write something. But, "What-to-write?" was a question that kept my mind busy. I didn't notice my hands filling my page, while I was still thinking! And this is what I came up with! :)

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on Jul. 28 2014 at 4:31 am
staryskies GOLD, Siteki, Other
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i realy like it and i can soo relate! nice.

on Jul. 27 2014 at 2:31 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

I love this! It's so amazingly written! Keep writing, please! All I can say is this poem, is stunning. Thanks for sharing this!

on Jul. 27 2014 at 12:27 pm
crazyShruti BRONZE, Haridwar, New York
4 articles 9 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is about trusting your feelings and taking chances, losing and finding happiness, appreciating the memories, learning from the past, and realizing people change.

excellent! 
 

on Jun. 15 2014 at 1:25 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

I love it, this poem is awesome! I especially like the part where you say "Nevermind" because thatr's how I feel when I'm trying to write sometimes. lol Could you check out my story? I need some feedback. :)  TeenInk.com/fiction/thriller_mystery/article/686391/The-Dreams-that-Keep-Gettign-Darker/

on Apr. 7 2014 at 10:37 am
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
LOOK AT MY PROFILE. DO IT.

amazingly written. it seems so mysterious the way you wrote it, like the words are trying to run away. i absolutely love it :)

on Mar. 31 2014 at 12:57 pm
mxmumpwr SILVER, Johnson City, Tennessee
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quite interesting.