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Alone

January 6, 2014
By amk7997 BRONZE, Congers, New York
amk7997 BRONZE, Congers, New York
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see in the world"-Mahatma Gandhi


A dark place
Never ending
Torture
Begging for it to
Stop
Nothing but
Tears
No one speaks
Silent
But thoughts are enough to
Kill
You cry
Silence
No one is there


The author's comments:
I was feeling deep and revisiting the past.

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amk7997 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 2 2014 at 7:36 pm
amk7997 BRONZE, Congers, New York
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see in the world"-Mahatma Gandhi

thank you !! I know that I need to add more imagery but I appreciate that you liked the simplicity :)

on Feb. 1 2014 at 3:59 pm
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
5 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Leave nothing but footprints,<br /> Take nothing but pictures,<br /> Kill nothing but time.

As reading this had an association on Pablo( Diego José Francisco de Paula Juan Nepomuceno María de los Remedios Cipriano de la Santísima Trinidad Ruiz y ) Picasso haha. I like the simple method of enumeration u used. It made it clear and easy to read but still all the words remained standing strong. Nice :)

on Jan. 17 2014 at 4:45 pm
Myvoice4change SILVER, Other, Other
9 articles 3 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything will be ok in the end. If it&#039;s not okay, it&#039;s not the end.&quot;

Aw, this is a sad poem and I'm sorry you had to go through this, but I like the way it was written, and that you used nouns like "torture, "tears," "silent," to emphasize the poems point. I might suggest some more imagery and descriptiveness, but good job!