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Can you hear me ?
November 1, 2013
If i lied and told you I was fine,
would you stop to listen?
If i showed you the X-ray of my heart,
would you then realize it was broken?
If I called out your name in total darkness,
could you find your way back with no problem?
If I cried in front of the world,
then could you see the pain you caused?
If I begged on my knees,
would you finally let me be?
If I bled more than I should,
would you even began to pity me?
If I worked hard to prove,
would you even think twice?
If I moved across towns,
cities,
states,
countries,
to be with you,
would you then understand how much I love you?
© Asia B., Hudson, MA
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BorderlineGenius777 SILVER said...
on Nov. 7 2013 at 3:27 pm
I like it, just because I am a sappy romantic thats used to being broken-hearted all the time because apparently life doesnt see fit to let me have lovexD but it is a bit cliche. However, its a good poem. 4/5:3
KaylaaLovee GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2013 at 12:25 pm
Thank you! Appreciate the honesty!! <33
CookieMonster24 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2013 at 12:22 pm
I'm going to be very honest because I don't want to see people at loss just because I lied to them. XD I thought that, in the beginning it was a little cliche d but I can see, I mean, its pretty obvious that you have a lot of potential. You can definiely do better. But it doesn't mean I didn't like it, because I loved it. I can see wht you're trying to convey. Thank you. Good uck.
KaylaaLovee GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2013 at 7:14 pm
Thanks for the honesty ! <333
KaylaaLovee GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2013 at 7:13 pm
Thankssssssss <3333
taylortheawesomeness SILVER said...
on Nov. 5 2013 at 7:10 pm
thats amazing!
KaylaaLovee GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2013 at 11:09 am
Thanks!! The ending is my fave too lol
Radwa said...
on Nov. 5 2013 at 10:08 am
it was realy nice poem
KaylaaLovee GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2013 at 9:55 am
Typo hahah but thanksssss
FlyingKite BRONZE said...
on Nov. 5 2013 at 9:52 am
Begin* It's really good though!
KaylaaLovee GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2013 at 9:30 am
Thanks for the feedback!!
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