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October 21, 2013
By freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
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freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston

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You're just
Invisible in his eyes
A wisp of wind
A shadow
A glance
Invisible.
But he's not
By any means.
Like a prince or
A star
Seen by everything
And everyone.
But no one can see
An invisible girl.
So know might not see
You.
But
Just because he can't
See you
Doesn't mean
He can't hear you.

© Rachel P., Wailuku, HI

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For my friend Jessie and her beautiful voice. Love you :)
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freeperson DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 20 2013 at 6:35 pm
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?&quot; - Ara Weston

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thnx :)    
DawnieRae BRONZE said...
on Nov. 20 2013 at 2:03 pm
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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that's fine! this is a beautiful poem! 
freeperson DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 4 2013 at 2:30 pm
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
59 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?&quot; - Ara Weston

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Supposed to be a "he" in between know and might, sorry :)