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Four Nails and A Crown of Thorns

September 27, 2013
By Crusamix316 BRONZE, Murphysboro, Illinois
Crusamix316 BRONZE, Murphysboro, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of chocolates you never know what your gonna get.-Forrest Gump


A country and world torn in shame.
So many people rebuke your name.
Little do they know about your love.
As beautiful as a white shining dove.
You shed your blood for all man kind.
I can only imagine what was on your mind.
Three nails and a crown of thorns.
Your clothes bloody shredded and torn.
But the cross was no match for you.
In three days you started something new.
Four holes where the nails had been.
You took those nails for all our sins.


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem to explain my love for Jesus Christ. He changed my life around and made me into the person i am now he is my King he is my Savior.

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on Sep. 30 2013 at 4:16 pm
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston

1cross+3nails=4gvn :) Cool beans I thought you would like the quote

on Sep. 30 2013 at 1:56 pm
AnInkling SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
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&ldquo;This is your life. Is it everything you dreamed that it would be, when the world was younger and you had everything to lose?&rdquo; Switchfoot<br /> &ldquo;Have I now become your enemy by telling you the truth?&rdquo; Galatians 4:16

Beautiful! I loved it, but you might want to add some more description to it, and take out the periods at the end of each line because it is a poem. 

Seby__D BRONZE said...
on Sep. 30 2013 at 1:30 pm
Seby__D BRONZE, New City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
I dont have one

NIce Work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!