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fading

June 14, 2013
By Anonymous

i take a look around me and realize that all things have a time limit slowly things begin to fade the clock is slowly ticking down for a moment time seems to stand completely still t get to thinking that forever was just a word we used as kids now it don't mean a thing cause there never was and never will be a forever now everything is the same a world of never ending gray in which i feel so alone i know you are by my side now because i can sense your presence i see the ground coming up to meet me my only hope now is that you will catch me i ask you one last thing and that is that you be strong and live for the both of us i take one final look at your face before everything fades to black the last thing i see are your tears of grief the last thing i feel are your tears of grief splashing upon my face like drops of rain i want to tell you how much i love you but, i can't, for my time has been spent


The author's comments:
i wrote this after the bullying got bad the guy told me to kill myself or he would kill me himself so i wrote this about me basically committing suicide.

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on Nov. 5 2013 at 6:40 pm
KaylaaLovee GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
14 articles 1 photo 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imperfection is beauty. Madness is genius. And its better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring. And when it comes down to it, I let them think what they want. If they care enough to bother with what I do, I'm already better than them."

SO amzing and deep. You can really feel the emotion in this piece. :)

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on Jul. 4 2013 at 1:37 pm
sirien SILVER, Coldwater, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
work hard play harder

well it has never been that hard for me a lot of what i write is how i truly feel in fact i have 49 poems as of right now it really is not that hard to say how i feel. writing is the only way i  can get how i truly feel out

on Jul. 4 2013 at 11:03 am
TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
45 articles 2 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;When it&#039;s over, I want to say: all my life<br /> I was a bride married to amazement.<br /> I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms. <br /> <br /> When it is over, I don&#039;t want to wonder<br /> if I have made of my life something particular, and real.<br /> I don&#039;t want to find myself sighing and frightened,<br /> or full of argument. <br /> <br /> I don&#039;t want to end up simply having visited this world.&rdquo;

Wow!! This is so true and just perfect description. You have just reflect what is your true feelings!! Its amazing how you put em into words!!