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Inevitability

May 27, 2013
By matthewclough PLATINUM, Wichita, Kansas
matthewclough PLATINUM, Wichita, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
“Everybody is a genius. But if you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will live its whole life believing that it is stupid.”


I am listening to an alternative song
About the power and infinite strength
Of love

While staring at a photograph of
A deep blue pool with crystal clear water
Reflecting

An explosive pink and orange sunset.
There is a young couple floating through
The ripples,

Her hair dancing with the rhythm of
The wind that also stirs the delicate leaves
Of palm trees

In the background with a heated passion.
His arm on her bare shoulder, a silhouetted
Smile

Brushing her cheeks with a July promise
Of solace and companionship. The evening
Is eternal,

Yet August lingers below the horizon
And the sun is always sinking lower and
Lower,

Piercing the flimsy, breathless clouds
With an unforgiving snap that scatters fragile
Particles,

Not unlike the breathless sob from my
Stomach that shreds through my heart as a
Tiny teardrop

Patters against the glossy image.
She is two hundred miles away, and it is
Now September.



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Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 21 2013 at 3:14 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

YES! I'm so happy to find someone else besides myself who appreciates the spectacular poetry by the Imagists. *Imagists high five* And your work is amazing. 

on Aug. 20 2013 at 7:01 pm
matthewclough PLATINUM, Wichita, Kansas
22 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Everybody is a genius. But if you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will live its whole life believing that it is stupid.&rdquo;

I feel like my best work comes through when I focus on imagery and the ideas associated with it, so I truly appreciate that.  Imagist poetry has always been one of my favorite types.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 20 2013 at 5:43 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

I know the tough feeling and emotion in this poem. I think many readers will relate to this beautifully-written poem. Again, I find in you an Imagist. I'm not sure if you read their work or not. But your imagery is very much alike to Imagist poetry. Congrats on the Editors' Choice. And yeah! Go alternative music.