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Collateral Damage

May 20, 2013
By bloodredsky BRONZE, Broadview Hts., Ohio
bloodredsky BRONZE, Broadview Hts., Ohio
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When Mommy vanished,
she left a skeleton living in the house.
Slowly the bricks fell, there was
an eye dripping tranquilly into dust
as it dampens into rubble. A walking shadow
20 feet away from the edge of the wreck appearing and
disappearing under street lamps.
The white string thinning, as it got further
attached in a knot to her bones.

When the girl
dropped down, it was time
to change what was.

She abandoned me
beside the battered shambles of a home.

I thought I was suffering in my mind,
remembering alone.
When she reappeared my wall dissolved to mist,
I felt
a freezing rain melting me raw
inside the warm home burning down.



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on May. 27 2013 at 9:12 am
haley101 DIAMOND, Windsor, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift.&rdquo;<br /> <br /> ― Mary Oliver

your so welcome. i'd love it if you checked out my work too  

on May. 26 2013 at 8:59 pm
bloodredsky BRONZE, Broadview Hts., Ohio
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Thank you very much, I love hearing what people have to say about my writings.

on May. 26 2013 at 6:00 pm
haley101 DIAMOND, Windsor, Connecticut
70 articles 5 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift.&rdquo;<br /> <br /> ― Mary Oliver

very powerful work. i like the juxtapostion of temperature in the last few lines.