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Loving a Soldier

May 23, 2013
By Anonymous

Loving a soldier is a high price to pay,
Loving him truly is hard when he’s away.
It’s being alone with nothing to hold,
It’s being young but feeling old,
It’s having him whisper his love for you;
It’s whispering back, “I love you too.”
There comes a kiss and a promise for more,
As his plane slowly rises to soar;
Reluctantly, painfully, letting him go,
While your insides are dying from wanting him so,
Watching him leave with eyes full of tears,
Standing alone with your hopes, dreams, and fears.
It’s sending a letter with the stamp upside down,
To a far away love in a far away town.
It’s going to church to kneel and pray,
And really meaning the things that you say.
Being in love will foster your dreams,
Of that far away soldier your mind fairly beams.
Days go by, no mail for a spell,
You wait for some word to hear he’s well.
Then a letter arrives, and you’ve given in,
To open his letter and read it with a grin,
Yes, he is well and misses you so,
It’s filled with the love you wanted to know.
Weeks are like months, and months like years,
You wait for the day when you’ll have no more fears.
Days go by slowly, how many have passed?
Yes, loving a soldier brings bitterness and fears,
Loneliness, sadness and tears.
Loving a soldier isn’t much fun,
But it’s worth the price when the battle is won;
And remember he is thinking of you every day,
He’s sad and he’s lonely while so far away,
So love him and miss him and hold your head high,
Be strong and have faith, wipe that tear from your eye.
It’s the high price you pay for loving a soldier.


The author's comments:
My boyfriend just joined the national guard and I wrote this for him. I love you babe, be safe. <3

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on May. 26 2013 at 5:15 pm
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
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All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers. <br /> Orison Swett Marden<br /> <br /> &quot;The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say.&quot; - Anais Nin<br /> <br /> we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

Wow I really loved this. The way you write is amazing. Kepp writing! :)

on May. 26 2013 at 5:13 pm
KaylaRachelleXD, Lander, Wyoming
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Kia-Kaha (Forever Strong)

Thanks that means alot to me. I have so many other poems, but I don't think they are ready to be viewed yet.

on May. 26 2013 at 11:12 am
ohfangirlplease SILVER, Cherryville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We need never be hopeless, because we can never be irreparably broken.&quot; -Looking For Alaska, John Green

This was great! You can really feel the bittersweetness of it, it captured the emotions magnificently. Your writing was very nice, too, very lyrical, you could say. Well done!