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What the Future Brings

May 12, 2013
By Jeeves12345 GOLD, Santa Maria, California
Jeeves12345 GOLD, Santa Maria, California
13 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's okay, I won't judge.


The future brings joy
The future brings peace
The future brings sadness
But soon will bring gladness
No matter how you look at it,
The future ahead is a journey thought about
Depends on what choices you make
You learn from your mistakes
Just pick yourself up if you fall
No matter how many times
Patches of darkness,
Can be overcome with a little sunshine
The future is in your own hands
Don’t let it go,
To be shattered into pieces
It deserves to be cherished
Like a porcelain doll
But it shouldn't be put up on a mantle forever
It needs to be looked at carefully
And the future will bring blessings


The author's comments:
Do good things for your own future and you shall receive blessings.

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on Aug. 1 2013 at 8:45 pm
Jeeves12345 GOLD, Santa Maria, California
13 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's okay, I won't judge.

Thank you, i try to do my best without sounding stupid as best as i can.

on Aug. 1 2013 at 8:45 pm
Jeeves12345 GOLD, Santa Maria, California
13 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's okay, I won't judge.

I don't know what else to say but thank you. I can't believe you had to read it 4 times! That's crazy! And I didn't think that by posting the stuff i do now, i wouldn't impact anyone or anything. But for you to say it's another jewel, it makes me want to cry so thank  you again!

on Aug. 1 2013 at 8:43 pm
Jeeves12345 GOLD, Santa Maria, California
13 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's okay, I won't judge.

Thank you.

on Jun. 4 2013 at 11:54 am
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

I like this positive poem! Normally I can't stand the cheesy idea of The Future is in Your Hands or Make the Best of Your Life, but you do an amazing job with the comparison to the porcelain doll. Great work! :D

on Jun. 4 2013 at 10:38 am
RoyalCorona SILVER, Grand Rapids, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 290 comments

Favorite Quote:
All of us fave failed to match our dream of perfection. I rate us on the basis of our splendid failure to do the impossible. -William Faulkner

Wow! I had to add this to my favorites, I just read it four times, and I love the first four lines, they are so impacting and expressive! Great job, another jewel from you, keep it up!!

on May. 22 2013 at 2:13 pm
Court901 BRONZE, Magnolia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Imagniation is not a talent of some people, but it is the health of every person" -Ralph Waldo Emerson

Wow! Great imagry and word choice. I really like this.