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The Platform

April 20, 2013
By alyssum GOLD, San Marcos, California
alyssum GOLD, San Marcos, California
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Favorite Quote:
The things that walk out when you open your mind. -Dylan McCoy


There’s a platform between
Bitter and sweet.
A platform for waiting
In sun and in sleet.
It doesn’t have guards
Or security measures
To get there is hard
But to get there is better

Better than sitting in
Places for living in
For winning in,
Smiling in,
For crying and lying in.

It doesn’t have windows
It doesn’t have walls
The platform,
To some,
It isn’t real at all
It is merely a myth
A simple fool’s legend
A nonexistent abyss
But it surely is real
A place for pain to heal
It is for the unfortunate
Who would rather be in between
Than back into their arguments
With love and health and children and loss
With environment, economy, entrapments, and costs.

There’s a platform between
Happy and sad.
Between bright open faces
And useless gray fads.
It has always been there,
Just in between,
Things that are believed in,
And things that are seen.
It can’t be found
But can’t be lost.
It spins round and round
Like an endless striped top.

It’s quite hard to get there,
But easy to leave.
But arriving is better than departing,
It seems.
There’s a platform between
One and One Hundred
Between South and North
Between towers and dungeons
Between tattered and torn
There’s a platform between
Inhaling and breath
This platform
Between
Birth and death.



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on Apr. 24 2013 at 6:36 pm
Childofthemind BRONZE, San Marcos, California
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i love how the last line kind of implies that the platform is life.

alyssum GOLD said...
on Apr. 23 2013 at 6:23 pm
alyssum GOLD, San Marcos, California
18 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
The things that walk out when you open your mind. -Dylan McCoy

Thank you so much!

on Apr. 23 2013 at 12:20 am
aladine_98 SILVER, Hemet, California
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This was... I can't even think of the perfect word for it. Beautiful? Thought-provoking and therefore amazing? Touching? Let's just say all of them. :)  I kept catching little end rhymes, but then just when I thought I got the pattern it was gone. (But that just made it more interesting!) And the story you told was captivating. Keep up the great writing!