I Take Back My Tears | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. I Take Back My Tears

I Take Back My Tears MAG

September 5, 2008
By Lilyan Howard BRONZE, Tallahasee, Florida
More by this author
Lilyan Howard BRONZE, Tallahasee, Florida
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile

I take back my tears
the wasted years
I spent crying
for what never could happen

I take back my heart
my shattered heart
Up off the ground
and back in my arms

I take back my hope
wasted on you
and toss it aside
for it has no meaning now

Nothing you say
no words
no songs
can heal the bleeding wound
That you opened again and again

I walk a free woman
held by nothing of yours
and fly away free
as free as the wind

© Ankaret E., Brampton, England

Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Summer Day
By Lost-In-Life GOLD
Whitby, Other
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

View profile
Poetry
Oh, let me be
By Forgotten_and_Lost GOLD
Coffeyville, Kansas
Forgotten_and_Lost GOLD, Coffeyville, Kansas
13 articles 0 photos 2 comments
View profile
Poetry
Nothing good comes from Pyromania
By Nelle PLATINUM
Crewkerne, Other
Nelle PLATINUM, Crewkerne, Other
21 articles 10 photos 49 comments
View profile
Poetry
Warrior
By Poe_poe SILVER
DeMotte, Indiana
Poe_poe SILVER, DeMotte, Indiana
7 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
you see me
By XxUnforgivenLovexX SILVER
Des Moines, Iowa
XxUnforgivenLovexX SILVER, Des Moines, Iowa
6 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
to be or not to be that is the question

View profile
Poetry
Prima Donna
By aniu15228 GOLD
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
aniu15228 GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
12 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 535 comments.

Patience97 PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2010 at 4:04 pm
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
27 articles 8 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

View profile
very relateable. sometimes i feel like i waste all my time being upset about things that never ever happen to me. great poem
Heavy-Thunder BRONZE said...
on May. 13 2010 at 3:20 pm
Heavy-Thunder BRONZE, Shorewood, Illinois
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Everything we see or seem is but a dream within a dream" - Edgar Allan Poe

View profile
This poem is so perfectfor what alot of people (including me) go through. Thanks for posting :)
Ashee97 said...
on May. 13 2010 at 2:57 pm
this is such a good piece! it brings back emotions and memoires, but i love poems like that! the inspiration is a sad expirence, but hey, weve all been there and can relate to this. really good job and i hope you will keep on writing more pieces. there is deffinatly emotion in this, which i love and i cant stress enough how good this is! great job, im proud of you :) even though i dont know you...lol. but amazing job! :)
StormyxD SILVER said...
on May. 13 2010 at 2:18 pm
StormyxD SILVER, Winter Park, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Late at night my mind would come alive with voices and stories and friends as dear to me as any in the real world. I gave myself up to it, longing for transformation." - Jo March, Little Women

View profile
I love this, totally empowering. We've all been there before.
MeganAnne PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2010 at 2:17 pm
MeganAnne PLATINUM, Niskayuna, New York
24 articles 0 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
All my life I've looked at words as if I were seeing them for the first time. ~Ernest Hemingway

View profile

This was so amazing, and almost brought me to tears.

great job, keep writing.

Angel4u SILVER said...
on May. 13 2010 at 10:55 am
Angel4u SILVER, Woodbridge, Virginia
9 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Cowards Die Many Times Before Their Death ; But The Valiants Never Taste of Death but Once&quot;.<br /> &quot;One&#039;s Heart Can Be Broken,but One&#039;s Faith Can Recover&quot;.<br /> &quot;Well Done Is Better Than Well Said&quot;.

View profile
nice job... we all somehow relate to that .....
Gothic_Ballerina BRONZE said...
on May. 13 2010 at 10:45 am
Gothic_Ballerina BRONZE, Lewistown, Montana
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Drugs are a waste of time. They destroy your memory and your self-respect and everything that goes along with with your self esteem. <br /> Kurt Cobain

View profile
This was well writen, good job ^.*
-Storm. said...
on May. 13 2010 at 9:37 am
-Storm., Houston, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
View profile
I can relate. Love it.
Literalist17 SILVER said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 10:18 am
Literalist17 SILVER, Monte Vista, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Tact is, of course, only for those who lack the wit to possess sarcasm&quot;

View profile
I really liked this one, The inspiration for the poem is a terrible thing, but it was very well written. nice job :) I could totally relate
GreenLover SILVER said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 10:51 pm
GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is but a number

View profile
that was really nice it liked it. would you mind taking a look at my poem "my child, my son" thanx :)
QmamaDiva BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 10:24 pm
QmamaDiva BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;m selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can&#039;t handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don&#039;t deserve me at my best.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Marilyn Monroe <br /> <br /> &quot;Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it&#039;s better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Marilyn Monroe

View profile
Simple but touching, showing heart and things that people can relate to. you did what others only attempted
Night_Walker GOLD said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 8:47 pm
Night_Walker GOLD, Salt Lake, Utah
10 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you want the rainbow, you gotta put up with the rain.

View profile
I absolutely love it!  That is the best poem I've ever read. 
HaleyLynn101 SILVER said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 8:41 pm
HaleyLynn101 SILVER, Leander, Texas
9 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Lyrics are the words to our hearts, that we are simply to afraid to speak.

View profile
You have no idea how long i have been waiting for someone to finally put my thoughts out there, that is exactly how i am beginning to feel. I LOVE IT!
EllaMcFarley BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 6:21 pm
EllaMcFarley BRONZE, Madison, Wisconsin
4 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;See ya later, Herc, it&#039;s been a real slice.&quot; -Megera from Hercules (my avatar!)<br /> &quot;I can&#039;t turn left!&quot; -Zoolander<br /> &quot;Someone get these mother f***ing snakes off this mother f***ing plane!&quot; -Samuel L. Jackson in Snakes On a Plane (funniest movie ever)

View profile
GOOD JOB. <3 i love it!!
booklover/writer said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 1:54 pm
That was really beautiful. i loved that poem soooooo much. U did an AMAZING job writing it. Good job :D
SunShineSparkle BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 12:52 pm
SunShineSparkle BRONZE, Orange, California
1 article 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
System of A Down - MIND&quot;you need the ones you love and love the ones that you need&quot;, HYPNOTIZE&quot;Mesmerize the simple minded Propaganda leaves us blinded&quot;, SAD STATUE&quot;What is in us that turns a deaf ear to the cries of human suffering&quot;

View profile
dude, this is trully deep, beautifly written and gives the feel of true sorrow. i very much like it.
only1life BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:12 am
only1life BRONZE, Tripoli, Other
1 article 0 photos 3 comments
View profile
ur poem is so heart_felt. I loved it. Keep it up!
R.S.RICKS GOLD said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:01 am
R.S.RICKS GOLD, Rokdale, Georgia
14 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
death and life the same but in diffrent forms so why try to change something you have no control over.

View profile
the way your words mean something as if someone really hurt you is amazing how tears filled my eyes as i read it was! well wow
Emmalee SILVER said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 8:40 am
Emmalee SILVER, Rayville, Louisiana
9 articles 14 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is what happens when you&#039;re busy making other plans. - John Lennon

View profile
Wonderful. :)
invisible13 GOLD said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 8:09 am
invisible13 GOLD, Gobles, Michigan
14 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
there is nothing so common as the wish to be remarkable

View profile

i dont usually pick faves but this is definitely one of them. could you possibly look at some of mine?