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You can not tell me

April 1, 2013
By alone13 BRONZE, Cambridge, Massachusetts
alone13 BRONZE, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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You cant tell me my feelings,
You can not chose what I say,
What I do,
How I act,
you can not tell me my feelings,
you can not tell me to pretend,
to pretend it isn’t real,
to pretend I do not want to die,
just so people will like me,
you can not say that I am stupid.
You can not say that I am not strong,
Because I am fighting to stay,
I am fighting for my place on this world,
Don’t try and push me off


The author's comments:
This is to my old friend,
not a friend I have had for a while
but a friend im done with

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alone13 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 4 2013 at 4:07 pm
alone13 BRONZE, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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thx!!!!!!!!!!!

alone13 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 4 2013 at 3:32 pm
alone13 BRONZE, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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thanks for ur revisions!

on Apr. 4 2013 at 3:25 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

I like the concept and the emotion amazing job

on Apr. 4 2013 at 1:09 pm
Literature_Darling GOLD, Warrenton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;To live is the rarest thing of all. Most people exsist and that is all.&quot; ~Oscar Wilde<br /> &quot;I am a writer quite by accident, the way one my fall and rip a hole in their jeans.&quot; ~Blogger H. B. Sachs

Good work! Watch your grammer at times but the poem itself was very nice!