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March 22, 2013
By ZoieRose GOLD, Olympia, Washington
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ZoieRose GOLD, Olympia, Washington
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People don't always put up walls to keep other people out, sometimes they put up walls to see who's strong enough to break them down

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Floating,
Falling,
Sinking,
Fading,
Always and forever waiting,
Hoping,
Wishing,
Wanting,
Dreaming,
Try and figure out the meaning,
Darkness,
Fear,
Crying,
Screaming,
Forever an abyssful feeling.

© Michelle W., Ada, MI

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witchwallow said...
on Dec. 18 2014 at 12:05 pm
witchwallow, Los Gatos, California
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I got tugged in to the words as I read, like I was spiraling into the very soul of the piece. Captures the truth, and was inspiring for my own work. Beautiful.
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 12:33 am
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Hey rose... This was good... Inspirations are hard to get. Lol so I go out there and find it but when I'm feeling a bit lazy, I feel somewhat like this.. Desperate for an inspiration :)
LiraDaeris PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 12:22 am
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I like the irony of the title with the direction of the mood. The words keep instigating falling when inspiring insinuates rising. It's a very good idea. I like how it played out as well.
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This is very good!
I find your writing style similar to mine and that intrigues me a great deal! :)