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March 12, 2013
By lexi.smith13 PLATINUM, Brownfield, Maine
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"A house divided against itself cannot stand" - Abraham Lincoln

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The bubbles, the fish, the stress doesn't bother,
All Advantages of being underwater.
Hold your nose,
here goes the cold water.
The sight you see,
with open eyes.
All of your stress,
calmly dies.

© Brittany B., Louisville, KY

The author's comments:
My cousin thought this poem was about death but no this is about opening your eyes under water and seeing a beautiful sight.
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