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March 5, 2013
By DannySpracklin SILVER, Omaha, Nebraska
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"I love you as certain dark things are to be loved, in secret, between the shadow and the soul."

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One more pill till I fade away

Far under the ocean


That’s faded grey



I’m in so deep




It’s never been explored
So I wait here

For someone to save me


So far no one has



But is that so bad?




Cause if they ever did





Would they get why I’m sad?
So I hide in a shell

And fake who I am


Cause it’s easier




to just




blend in with the sand

© Harrison L., Ruston, LA

The author's comments:
What inspired me to write this is personal problems and how i feel. I hope that other people can relate to what I'm going threw.
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MsPendragon BRONZE said...
on Mar. 19 2013 at 2:17 pm
MsPendragon BRONZE, Batesville, Indiana
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Your very welcome. Good work
DannySpracklin SILVER said...
on Mar. 18 2013 at 5:08 pm
DannySpracklin SILVER, Omaha, Nebraska
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&quot;I love you as certain dark things are to be loved, in secret, between the shadow and the soul.&quot;

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Thank you its nice to know someone acually gets how i feel sometimes.
sadesdd DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 13 2013 at 11:15 am
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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What a good poem I understand your feeling by the word choice you use. Again, great job.
MsPendragon BRONZE said...
on Mar. 13 2013 at 10:09 am
MsPendragon BRONZE, Batesville, Indiana
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This is beautiful and oh so true for me. This is making me tear up a bit