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And You're Gone?

February 27, 2013
By CallaLilly BRONZE, Salem, Indiana
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CallaLilly BRONZE, Salem, Indiana
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"You cant be yourself if you dont believe in you."

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I watched the sun fall and the stars rise,
I seen the vacant stare in your eyes,
I felt the pain in the first slap,
The anger and undying rage burning inside you,
I begged for your forgivness,
I couldnt watch you leave like that,
I watched the stars fall and the sun return,
I waited for you to come back,
You never came back.

© Rachel M., Camarillo, CA

The author's comments:
It has to do with my old relationship. Its not good and makes no sense to some people but it has everything to do with the ex and myself.
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